I dislike reading literature whats a great book to recommend based on my reasons?

I believe there are flaws in the english and grammar as part of the structure form that Authors use in writing literature. Not all of it like the basic grammar, Its the part when your using your imagination while the Character is speaking in dialogue, When the dialogue ends, and there is the period. By rule the period in punctuation wraps up the Dialogue sequence. followed by the quotation marks and the He said , she said structure scheme, So by then you already used your imagination in how the character portrayed its sequence of action, plot, etc, The Flaw I believe that makes it obsolete and ineffective, is when the meaning or action is summed up at the very end with the he said she said. such as he said sarcastically, when I just finished the scene in my head as him speaking angrily.. Then it changes the whole out come of what just happened in my imagination, therefore I have to stop, redo and edit what just conjured up in my mind, The process of reading with your imagination, information that is with held after the he said/ she said structure scheme doesn't allow a natural discourse of participating in the story telling context. It puts a wrench in the fundementals of story reading,